Hiya Charles,
Great work, really liked it. Two thoughts – I (personally) think it could use a bit more bass and punch, especially in the middle section after the buildup.
Regarding the buildup however, there seems to be a beat missing around the 2:00 mark “Jump”. When counting the bars/beats there isn’t, but perceptually there is a pause that only later makes sense. Might be an idea to have a bass kick for that first beat to keep the tempo continuity then leave the rest of that section to do it’s thing.
Just my $2 worth – great work 🙂
Andy