Hey guy! I’ll be honest.
Your track Dark Afternoons is not that bad but it sounds empty. A lot of deep-house songs have very few elements but they sound good. Deadmau5’s stuff sometimes sounds good too even with very few things in the track. This one just sounds empty – when I listen to it, I’m like “yeah I see what you wanted to do here, but you could have been working more on this synth, add effects…” etc.
You can make good tracks whithout using all the effects your DAW allows you to (remember, “less is more” they say. Don’t put effects everywhere, but you can use them a bit more I think). But I like the melody. It reminds me of a Deadmau5 song I think, but I don’t remember which one.
Early Days is a better one imo even if I think you could have spent more time on mixing and mastering it – don’t worry, that’s pretty much the same for me. I know a few things other people could do to improve their tracks but can’t figure out what’s wrong with my mixing aha ! It reminds me of a few tracks Avicii used to do four/five years ago.
I’ll follow you to see what you’ll release it the future. If you want more feedback, don’t be afraid to ask, and keep on working ! You have good melodies, work more on them 🙂
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