Goood track alot of good sounds and elements. Very clear production i take it you use logic? Ok now for feedback.. the structue needs alot of work… dance music is about repetition… and slowly introducting elements. For me after intro (0.59) you need to drop the section that starts at 2.39… its got all the groove and will get the dance floor rocking.. its ok for me til about 4.49 then you could go into breakdown then build back up til the 2.39 dance floor rocking bit again.
Your stuff sounds alot like the stuff i just to write when i started… written out of the pure passion of music.. althou alot different vibe wise… you have something that jsut need tweaked alittle..
The best adavice i was ever given is… write another tune. The more you write the more you learn… then 10tunes down the line you can come back to your early work and use the skills you have learnt
maximlee
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