Second original produced track! Need opinions please! - Digital DJ Tips

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April 30, 2013 at 7:35 am #39800

Milos Djordjevic
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I like it

May 11, 2013 at 1:09 pm #40216

ElMuppet
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I like all parts of it: melody, vocals, drums but as stand alone parts. I think that you should make better phrases, like using fade in/out. It would sound more liquid-like and not so cut off-like. Cuz it just came from the punchiest melody part directly into drum-only part. Also talking about melody, I think that you should add for example second melody going on over you melody, maybe different in cord progression or an octave or two lower or higher.

I’m not nearly pro but that are just my constructive thoughts. I was great for second song of yours!

May 11, 2013 at 1:25 pm #40217

ElMuppet
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Your first song is imho better, it has nice progression, it builds up, just add such thing to your second (if you wanna make it better, or just keep in mind this thing while doing future projects.)

May 12, 2013 at 7:33 am #40235

Dru Denizen
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Good Track I enjoyed it.
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