My 'promo mix' – what do you think?

Not bad ! I love the songs you used. Some transitions could have been made in a smoother way imo but it’s good anyway. For a promo mix I think you should do more mash-ups to show the clubs that this is your work and not only someone picking his favorite songs and pressing play and pause like a lot of new DJs do sometimes (at least where I live…).

Oh and I think you came to the wrong forum. Here you go for posting mixes : http://www.digitaldjtips.com/forum/mixes-music-shows/