Well I listened to this mix during breakfast today and I like the music style.
Here are my points:
1. Music selection:
I like the whole selection of the music, as they are songs that go good together, except I agree with x-Kisscut-x the first 2 did not blend as well as the rest of the list.
2. Transistions:
I think you have the basics down pretty good, but sometimes it seems you lack a little confidence in your abilities (they are there and I can hear them, so you should have confidence) and hence some of the transitions (e.g. song 1->2, song 3->4) are a bit harsh for my taste, you drag the transition quite long and then punch it in to quickly sometimes. Do not get me wrong, those transitions do work and are better than 50% of the club DJs in my town 😉 so no worries, but there is room for improvement. However on other songs your transitions are awesome (e.g. song 2->3 I think comes to mind and a song past the middle of the mix). So you can do it. Just have confidence and do it always with your heart and do not think too much 😉
3. Energy:
You really had that down. The mix had a red line through it and built its energy really well. This maybe why you selected songs 1 (which is an awesome intro mix, love that one) and 2 after each other. So energy of the mix is really good and I think you like the music you played yourself.
Apart from that: If I were a club owner I would hire you. Good basic skills and nice song selection.
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