Not bad.
Didn’t like the first vocal sample.
In the main part I think the mix is far from optimal, the level of your various instruments/sounds doesn’t feel right or in good balance to me.
What sets apart an awesome deep house production from so-so ones? An epic bassline! Your bass, and also the kicks IMO, lack substance and volume. Too flat.
The filtery build-up kinda sounds don’t fit that genre at all IMO and are way over the top for my liking.
Last: song structure. I feel like sth was missing, like you were building up to sth, that never came to fruition. Don’t get me wrong, I like that building vibe, but there should be something more for a climax before coming to an end rather suddenly.
Just my humble opinion, think you’re on a good track, keep doing what ur doing 🙂
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