Overall, I thought the song selection and progression was appropriate; transitions were smooth and felt natural.
I think the only real negative I have is the sound quality. It sounds as if the recording was initially in mono and then somehow expanded to stereo, or something was up with the software/hardware recording it. I can hear the kicks and snares (normally panned to center) primarily in the left channel but not in the right. It’s also lacking a lot of the low end. Compared with your 2nd mix on the page, there’s a clear difference.
Props on the solid mixing, if you have a better quality version I’d gladly listen again.
Cheers!