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First Production Song, Please give feedback and tips!

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  • July 8, 2013 at 7:10 am #42028
    Terry_42
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    Wow I am sorry, I hate to give bad feedback, but that production is not good.
    The sounds used sound very cheesy and I suspect something went wrong when mastering (if it is mastered at all).
    The breaks are totally off beat and while synced (ableton does that) they are totally out of time.
    Several sounds are also totally out of time (they are synced, but not timed).

    You should go back to the drawing board and learn some music theory before you go again.

    July 8, 2013 at 3:13 pm #42034
    DJ Bizkit
    Member

    Well I appreciate the feedback nonetheless. I have been making attempts to learn musical theory and it has been progressing slowly. I don’t view it as the best of what I can do at all. It has been tough due to not having many people around who give me feedback such as you. I do not consider it negative, more constructive because I want to know what I don’t know. Given that it’s my first dedicated attempt to putting myself out there, I thank you for actually responding.

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    July 8, 2013 at 3:15 pm #42035
    DJ Bizkit
    Member

    Well I appreciate the feedback nonetheless. I have been making attempts to learn musical theory and it has been progressing slowly. I don’t view it as the best of what I can do at all. It has been tough due to not having many people around who give me feedback such as you. I do not consider it negative, more constructive because I want to know what I don’t know. Given that it’s my first dedicated attempt to putting myself out there, I thank you for actually responding.

    July 8, 2013 at 9:24 pm #42047
    Beto
    Member

    Guys, check out this vocal: [media=youtube]XZ57uIwXENM[/media]

    July 9, 2013 at 7:35 am #42067
    Terry_42
    Keymaster

    You are most welcome.
    While the title might be cheesy the book “How to write a Pop Song” actually covers good the timing and sequencing need in a songs structure and this might be the thing to get you off the ground.
    Your ideas and creativity are good, you just need to get the structure in there for starters.

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