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    Shimi Hotz
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    listening while coding i’ll comment as it plays:
    really really really really nice first track. sounds like “metal” trance. not at all cheesy which I find in a lot of trance.
    so far after 10 minutes sounding really good and smooth.
    nice gradual mix at 15 , i would’ve cut a tiny bit off the mids of the outgoing track to make more space for the incoming hi hats.
    25:20 you can cut out the out going track, i think you brought it back in though im not sure what you did.
    26:42 a bit of an iffy mix. the track or (or loop) is off beat but ok i guess, it seems superfluous anyway.
    29 nice effects, keep it tight ie. exactly till the drop, or whenever desired, but that takes a lot of practice.
    whats with the looping? seems to have kept coming back since ~27 or is part of the track, i cant figure it out.
    keep things simple and coherent.
    35 i wish it wasn’t such a sweet high pitched mix but that’s a matter of taste.
    47 i could see why u did the looping twice, not needed, imo, but sounds cool.
    48:15 very abrupt mix but perfectly legitimate. can be smoother but still good. i’ve seen top DJ’s stopping one mix or bunging up the beat for a few seconds to drop on the next track and if its a good(contextually fitting :)) track, an abrupt change it can be hugely effective.
    1:03 nice
    it’s really pretty good (too bad its trance music though)

    #2258371
    thinking
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    Dude, thanks for the detailed breakdown! I’m taking a look also between coding breaks 🙂

    Overall I agree with your sentiment – I’m a fan of trance as much as anybody (listen to alot of ABGT), but to be honest, I like the deeper sounds of progressive house and techno, so that’s probably more where I’ll be going in future mixes, it starts to sound ‘cheesy’ to me too after a bit. I knew I would have a very wide range of listeners on this one so I thought, “How can I cover everything, from downtempo to super dancy and energetic?” Probably made a few choices that weren’t my absolute favorites but that’s part of the learning process I guess.

    25-29 – I liked the “heyyyyyahhhh…” vocal stuff going on in the background so I thought it added to the transition. If it’s too much that’s good to keep in mind. I’m not sure about the rest of the comments you had, though. I honestly didn’t do much to the track, if you listen to Rebound that’s kinda just how it goes. Maybe just not everyone’s favorite production style :). I wanted to give Mat Zo a rep cause he’s one of the best in my opinion in blending between all different genres.

    47 – yep, I messed up once with the beatmasher, but got in a good one as well. Just need to practice with effects more and tone it down further still (it’s so tempting!)

    I haven’t heard this a lot in feedback yet but I wasn’t too happy with the way volume levels turned out on this one (I stopped trusting Traktor autogain and missed the mark a few times with the manual gain settings), was it that noticeable?

    One thing I’ve read a lot here is that non-DJ folks often don’t notice the little technicalities that we do. I was afraid that wouldn’t be true and kept worrying about the little mistakes here and there. But surprisingly it’s true – most people don’t even listen that closely! Just pick good music and the rest follows I suppose 🙂

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