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Check out my Production on Soundcloud. NEED SOME SERIOUS FEEDBACK!!

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  • June 28, 2011 at 5:52 pm #1387
    Alex Wild
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    Keep at it and keep practising. It can take a long time to get all the skills to put a good track together. Just make whatever sounds good to you. As long as you’re having fun it’s good!

    About that track in particular, you could do with some more sounds in there, and change the song as it progresses.

    June 28, 2011 at 5:57 pm #1394
    Jona Menasso
    Member

    Alex Wild, post: 1376 wrote: Keep at it and keep practising. It can take a long time to get all the skills to put a good track together. Just make whatever sounds good to you. As long as you’re having fun it’s good!

    About that track in particular, you could do with some more sounds in there, and change the song as it progresses.

    Thank you Alex… im not pro i said that. xD Check my “Welcome Thread” if you want to know what im tlaking about…

    Thank you once again for your feedback and im going to work on that track much more… i think i need the “kick in the butt” to get more confident about what im doing…..

    June 28, 2011 at 8:09 pm #1000549
    mr_john
    Member

    what alex said… Also the bass is a little overpowering. I like the drops. 8 min seems a tad long for that song, without changing it up more.

    June 28, 2011 at 8:27 pm #1443
    Jona Menasso
    Member

    YUP!!! That is the compression on the bassline… xD it was my fault, i love powerfull basslines…

    im changing thing on it as you guys keep on giving me some feedback… then when i am realy happy with it im showing you guys..

    June 29, 2011 at 7:53 am #1590
    Benny Mackney
    Member

    The counts are a little unorthadox, and it puts me off a bit because the track is doing something unexpected. A good example of this is the 24 beat section at about 0:48 – 1:00. My ears are expecting it to go for 32 beats and then it drops off early and it just feels… wrong, I suppose. Not that I’m saying it’s terrible :L No, you have some nice tunes going there, it’s just the structure is a little off-putting.

    June 29, 2011 at 10:50 am #1612
    Jona Menasso
    Member

    Benny Mackney, post: 1579 wrote: The counts are a little unorthadox, and it puts me off a bit because the track is doing something unexpected. A good example of this is the 24 beat section at about 0:48 – 1:00. My ears are expecting it to go for 32 beats and then it drops off early and it just feels… wrong, I suppose. Not that I’m saying it’s terrible :L No, you have some nice tunes going there, it’s just the structure is a little off-putting.

    Thank you benny… that is just what i am expecting to ear from you guys… i am going to improve it…

    June 29, 2011 at 3:32 pm #1678
    D-Jam
    Participant

    Jona Menasso, post: 1371 wrote: NEED SOME SERIOUS FEEDBACK!!

    You seriously suck…hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah :p

    I’m just kidding. I like the bouncy synths, but think they don’t work well with the beat and bassline. You should explore a more bouncy “jackin” kind of beat. Reminds me of stuff I used to hear on Relief Records.

    June 29, 2011 at 4:09 pm #1698
    Ivyquake
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    D-Jam, post: 1667 wrote: You seriously suck…hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah :p

    I’m just kidding.

    Hahahaha, that’s messed up D-jam. Me and my other Dj friends hit each other with that all time.

    Jona- your track is good, just keep working hard – Good luck!!!!

    June 29, 2011 at 5:53 pm #1717
    Jona Menasso
    Member

    D-Jam, post: 1667 wrote: You seriously suck…hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah :p

    I’m just kidding. I like the bouncy synths, but think they don’t work well with the beat and bassline. You should explore a more bouncy “jackin” kind of beat. Reminds me of stuff I used to hear on Relief Records.

    Thank you d-jam for your nice feedback 😉

    June 29, 2011 at 5:54 pm #1000623
    Jona Menasso
    Member

    Ivyquake, post: 1687 wrote: Hahahaha, that’s messed up D-jam. Me and my other Dj friends hit each other with that all time.

    Jona- your track is good, just keep working hard – Good luck!!!!

    Thank you ivyquake… that is the kind of thing i am needing to hear…

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