Hi Moray. I listened to some of Afternoon sessions and have a couple of pointers for you.
1. You should check volume levels prior to recording for both channels on their own,mixed and the recording level. Your volume changes drastically at about 4:30 – this sounds like a minor criticism, but it gives an impression of sloppyness and means people will have to adjust their sound. I would have scratched that and started again every-time
2. You need to practice beat-mixing and synhcing tunes. When mixing house genres you need them in time, in synhc and then you can start to work on the harder stuff which is the delicate subtle bit that makes your mixes stand out as accomplished. Some of your mixes were out, yet you mixed Let’s Groove in ok, but out not so well.
3. I would drop bass or other gains/volumes down only at certain points, for example drop the bass on one side as the bass on another comes in(not always), you seemed to twiddle a bit sometimes.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism and continue what you were doing well.
Your tracks seem well matched and you are starting in a journey that you will only get better if you take advice for what it is and practice.
Hope this helped.
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