The first thing the tracklist is wrong.
The first transition the volume was a tad loud (2:54).
The 2nd transition was a bit abrupt. Maybe I’m wrong but it sounds like you turned down the bass to in order mix in the song (????). That’s an edm technique that isn’t used in Hip Hop. It rarely sounds good. I’m not fan of using edm techniques for mixing Hip hop since for over 30 years people mixed Hip Hop without using these techniques you should be able to do so as well.
The 3rd transition (9:08) was off, too loud and the beats weren’t totally matched.
The 4th transition I don’t what to say about that.
The 5th transition was a tad abrupt as well.
The 6th transition was a tad abrupt again.
The 7th transition was abrupt again.
For me a good mix consists of good track selection and solid mixing techniques. Trackwise your mix is an 5 since most of the tracks are mediocre with the exception of the DITC Track. Mixing wise I have to say it needs work. I didn’t listen any of your other mixes so I can’t say were your mixing level is actual at but this mix isn’t very good.