First Electro Attempt

You have a very nice sound mate, it’s very polished and professional. However I found the structure of the track lacking – while you had some of the basic conventions in there, I felt lost – there wasnt enough going on to tell me whereabouts in the song I was.

Maybe if you tried a more traditional song structure of Intro-Verse-Bridge-Chrous-Verse-Bridge-Chrous-Breakdown-Bridge-Chrous-Lead Out, this would create better progression of the song.

However, all that said, it’s a fantastic sounding track, really tight fat sound, I’m looking forward hearing more from you!